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Free Writing Exercise 3/27

Sophia Fundora
1. My writing process for project 2 was different from project 1 in the way that I had a plethora of research papers and academic journals to dig through for information for my argument versus in project one I mainly had a single book and a single movie to go off of.
2. the first official draft I submitted and had reviewed by my professor was the most helpful because I had actually polished my shitty first draft prior to my meeting because I wanted a response on a more thought out piece of writing versus a couple suggestions on some bullet points.
3. If you asked me before I wrote Project 2, I would've told you Project 1 would be my all time favorite because it contained a lot more free writing but since I focused on a research question that related to my major for Project 2, I truly did enjoy writing it much more than our first assignment.

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  1. I agree that project two required a lot more research and time to find information. I also said that project two was more enjoyable to write since we could choose any topic and relate it to our major.

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  2. I agree that my first draft was the most helpful as well. I felt lost in my organization of my paper but as soon as I was given advice and tips on how to organize it, my final draft was so much easier

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  3. I agree that the process of researching helped immensely in the writing process, and therefore made this paper easier to write, and more enjoyable, than project one.

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  4. I agree with you, for me project 2 was more enjoyable to write than project 1 as well.

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