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Writing Activity March 27, 2018

My writing process for project 2 was different from project 1 because I had to conduct research towards my argumentative topic. I also was required to use the Florida State university database in order to find peer-reviewed article that would provide me with correct information. This essay also had several sources whom mad me sound more credible towards my audience, which enabled me to write more about my topic.

The personally think that writing a first draft and then revising it in order for it to be my final draft to be very helpful when writing a research essay. I was able to carefully go over any grammatical or punctuation errors as well as make sure that all my sentences made sense and were not random.

I enjoyed project 2 the most because I was required to conduct research on my topic, which allowed me to expand my knowledge towards an argument that is personal to me and it made me sound even more credible when discussing this argument face to face with someone.

Comments

  1. Although I liked project one more, I really like your reasoning for preferring project two. It's always a good thing to expand your knowledge about things you didn't know before, and making yourself more credible about something you enjoy talking about.

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  2. I think project two was more enjoyable as well since we had an opportunity to choose any topic. I agree that project two also required a lot more research, and we got to learn about databases and credible sources which is beneficial.

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  3. I had the same feeling about finding it easier to write my final draft after I had already had my first draft reviewed for suggestions.

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  4. I agree as well that I preferred project 2 over project 1. I already knew the stance on my topic that I was going to take, however, because I was able to expand my knowledge on it, it gave me all the more reason to argue that side.

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  5. I preferred writing only two drafts too because when it came to the final draft I didn't have to revise too much. I also enjoyed writing project two the most because my topic was personal to me.

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