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Ayhan, Gulen. "Suicide Risk Among Prisoners in French Guina: Prevalence and Predictive Factors."BMC Psychiatry, Vol 17, No. 1, 2017 DOI 10.1186/s12888-017-1320-4

Gülen Ayhan stated, the risk of prisoners committing suicide in France are much higher than other countries. The writer uses an analytical approach by conducting new research on prisoners who were admitted between September 2013 to December 2014.Through the research found, out of the 707 prisoners that were observed, an average of 13.2% had a risk of suicide with 14% having moderate risk and 15.1% with a high risk. However, the majority of the prisoners had a low risk of 41.9%. Therefore, the article concluded that prisoners in France are not at a high risk of suicide; they are at a lower risk.


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  1. Mia PermuyFebruary 22, 2018 at 12:50 PM

    Great annotation! I personally see no problems with it. Good job (:

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