Syvannah Boland
After receiving my peer review, I am going to make changes when it comes to my second draft. I am going to make sure to include more evidence from the original Beauty and the Beast and the newer film, such as quotes and detailed descriptions of the differences between the two. I will also make sure to correct my format for the essay, and including a works cited page (once I include my quotes and resources).
After receiving my peer review, I am going to make changes when it comes to my second draft. I am going to make sure to include more evidence from the original Beauty and the Beast and the newer film, such as quotes and detailed descriptions of the differences between the two. I will also make sure to correct my format for the essay, and including a works cited page (once I include my quotes and resources).
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