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Reflection on project 2

1)  My writing process was different, because for project two I researched a lot more. I spent a lot of time researching to find facts to back up my arguments, and I also cared about this assignment more. It was easier to do, because I cared a good deal about what I was writing about.

2) The first draft helped me the most, because after my conference I understood what I needed to say, and the mistakes I made. It helped me a lot when writing my second draft, because i had a better understanding of the assignment.

3) I personally enjoyed project two more than project one, because I was writing about something that is important to me. This gave me the drive to work harder on this project. Project one was harder to understand, but project two you can have a clear argument.

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  1. UnknownMarch 27, 2018 at 12:59 PM

    I also agree that I enjoyed project 2 more because I cared about my topic. I also agree that this assignment required a lot more research than project 1.

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  2. Sophia FundoraMarch 27, 2018 at 1:02 PM

    Alison, I agree that project two was personally much more enjoyable because you got to dig deep when it came to issues you truly cared about. I agree that the first draft conference was the most helpful part of the process because It gave very useful insight and assistance.

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