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Sydney Meyer
March 27 2018

#1 My writing process was different in project two from project one because I made sure to go back and reread the whole paper rather then just the section I was suggested to fix. I also had a friend read this paper. project one I didn't change very much from my first draft and my final draft but project two I changed a lot of information and made my ideas more clear.
#2 The draft that I preferred the most was draft two to my final draft because I had already revised some of my ideas and made them more clear which helped me bring the paper together when writing the final draft of my paper.
#3 between project 1 and 2 I enjoyed project two more because I got to research a major topic that is worldwide and I learned more things during project twos process even though project one seemed more fun I like the learning aspect of project two better.

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  1. UnknownMarch 27, 2018 at 12:58 PM

    I also agree that I change a lot from draft 1 to draft 2 during this project, while I basically didn't change much my first paper. Also like you I enjoyed project 2 the most!

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  2. UnknownMarch 27, 2018 at 1:02 PM

    I also had to change a lot I wrote about in my first draft in order to have a well-developed argumentative essay. I also enjoyed writing project 2.

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