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Kirstyn Marsh
ENC2135

1. My writing process for project 2 was of course, a lot more analytical. It was a lot like writing a DBQ. I had to look at the sources I collected and found a way to group them in a way that was most beneficial to my paper. In project one I simply watched two movies and it was more of a compare and contrast fathering than arguing something like I did in project 2. Unlike project 1, I found it easier to find the “so what” factor in project too because it was pretty much given.
2. Draft 1 helped me the most, especially with project two because I got my criticism right away. This way, it was easier for me to organize my paper because I was given the idea to use subtitles. Where it would normally take me a whole day to finish my paper, I finished my final draft in a few hours and did not need a second draft. I feel as help with my first draft was very beneficial.
3. I actually enjoyed project 2 the most because it was something I found interesting and was passionate about, trophy hunting. Yes, it was more difficult to write in having so many sources however, because I had all of these sources I didn’t find myself feeling as if I did not have enough information to put into my paper.

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  1. sydney meyerMarch 27, 2018 at 12:58 PM

    I agree that it was more difficult to write a paper with so many sources although it did help in the long run when needing examples or new information to support a point.

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  2. Carissa NguyenMarch 27, 2018 at 1:03 PM

    I agree that writing only one draft can be a lot easier when it comes to writing the final draft. I also found project two to be the most interesting to write about.

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