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Megan Heller


Ayhan, Gulen, et al. "Suicide Risk among Prisoners in French Guiana: Prevalence and Predictive Factors." BMC Psychiatry, Vol 17, No. 1, 2017 DOI 10.1186/s12888-017-1320-4

Prisoners are highly at risk for suicidality, therefore the evaluation of this prevalence and factors is important to understanding the overall risk of imprisonment. To understand the risk factors Gülen Ayhan, et al. conducted a study to examine the correlation between French Guianan inmates and the Mainland French inmates and the risk factors and predictive factors. They found that risk factors included depression, dysthymia, panic disorder, generalized anxiety disorder, childhood abuse, and sexual assault. It was concluded that French Guiana had slightly lower suicide risk than Mainland France due to differences in social stigmatism of imprisonment. However, there was no significant difference between the two nations, overall.

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