After looking
over my peer review, I will be making a lot of changes on my second draft. I
will format my paragraphs in the right order so readers can comprehend. I will
also talk more about the adaptations that the director of “Gnomeo and Juliet”
had to make in order for the new audience to better relate to the film. I will
talk about themes/moral, language, and rhetorical choices. Peer reviewing
really helped me understand what I had to talk about in my essay because before
peer reviewing, I had no idea as to what I was supposed to talk about.
Throughout chapter 1 of “The Bedford Book of Genres,” I learned that there are a variety of ways to improve one’s writing. Several writers tend to get carried away while writing that they forget who their audience is and what message they are trying to deliver. This is when one must ask themselves what their purpose of writing is, do they want to present a narrative/ tell a story, inform, or persuade. After figuring out ones purpose they must choose a genre to be able to shorten their idea and be concise. In order for this to occur one must know the basic qualities and agreed-upon rules about the genre they are composing. Once one makes those decisions they move on to the rhetorical situation which mainly explains the idea. This allows the writer to provide support on their purpose such as saying what is great about it or provide statistics, which will automatically make their writing more interesting for the audience to read, as well as, get t...
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