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Carissa Nguyen : Action Plan

For my second draft, I am definitely going pull out my main point from my first draft and organize them into separate paragraphs. Now, that I understand the project better I know what to write about so, I can come up with better examples and ideas in my paper. The peer review really helped me see what I can do to improve my paper by bringing up topics that never occurred to me. Lastly, I want to make my introduction paragraph a lot more grasping to the readers and add a thesis statement because I feel like it summarizes what the paper will mostly discuss.

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