After getting my peer review, some changes i'd like to make are adding more quotes from the modern version of Charlie and The Chocolate Factory. I spoke a lot more about the original movie, Willy Wonka and The Chocolate Factory.I also need to add in-text citations with my writing. I'd also like to reorganize my structure by taking away some sentences within the first and second paragraphs that were repeated very similarly too many times. There wasn't any misinterpreted logic in the corrections she gave.
This text showed me how us as readers perceive a certain font or text and how it can influence our mood and how we feel about a certain reading. It also showed me how elaborate texts can draw us into something such as a poster or a title page of a book. Also how very bland fonts do not appeal to many readers as they might think of it as boring and plain. This gives me a lot to think about as project three comes closer. It makes me think of the reader and what type of fonts might draw them into my website, social media page, etc. This text was very helpful for this type of assignment.
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