After getting my peer review, some changes i'd like to make are adding more quotes from the modern version of Charlie and The Chocolate Factory. I spoke a lot more about the original movie, Willy Wonka and The Chocolate Factory.I also need to add in-text citations with my writing. I'd also like to reorganize my structure by taking away some sentences within the first and second paragraphs that were repeated very similarly too many times. There wasn't any misinterpreted logic in the corrections she gave.
Throughout chapter 1 of “The Bedford Book of Genres,” I learned that there are a variety of ways to improve one’s writing. Several writers tend to get carried away while writing that they forget who their audience is and what message they are trying to deliver. This is when one must ask themselves what their purpose of writing is, do they want to present a narrative/ tell a story, inform, or persuade. After figuring out ones purpose they must choose a genre to be able to shorten their idea and be concise. In order for this to occur one must know the basic qualities and agreed-upon rules about the genre they are composing. Once one makes those decisions they move on to the rhetorical situation which mainly explains the idea. This allows the writer to provide support on their purpose such as saying what is great about it or provide statistics, which will automatically make their writing more interesting for the audience to read, as well as, get t...
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