For my second draft I will go into greater detail about the differences between the two genres and give more specific examples. The peer review allowed me to see where my faults were in the first draft. Going into the second draft, not only will I include more detail, but I will also fix any grammatical mistakes. I will make this draft more organized and use more concepts we learned in class. To finish my second draft off, I want to make a better and more organized conclusion to my paper! I will do so by better summarizing the whole paper instead of just having the paper end without a summary as I did in my first draft.
For my action plan I will add more pictures to my website and continue to expand on my topic. I also plan to make posters to place around campus to reach outside audiences and use that as my nondigital source. I will continue to work over the weekend to finish the project and best carry out my message on my website.
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