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Kirstyn Marsh
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Ayhan, Gulen, et al. "Suicide Risk among Prisoners in French Guiana: Prevalence and Predictive              Factors." BMC Psychiatry, vol. 17, no. 1, 2017 DOI 10.1186/s12888-017-1320-4

     According to Ayhan, "France has the highest suicide rate among 15 European countries, [and] French inmates commit suicide 6 times more often than men in the general population." (1) Due to this significantly higher suicide rate of French inmates, the goal of the study was to measure the signs and extensiveness of suicidal risk factors in the French territory, French Guiana. Along with their physical exam, new inmates were dealt the Mini International Neuropsychiatric Interview (MINI) in which psychiatrists gauge their risk of suicide and disorders, ultimately categorizing them as low, medium, or high risk level of suicide. The MINI uncovered that of those at risk of suicide, fourteen percent were at high risk, still a smaller amount than the inmates of mainland France. Predictive factors ranged from gender and sentencing to childhood traumas and psychiatric disorders.

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  1. UnknownFebruary 22, 2018 at 12:49 PM

    I think you covered everything really well and stated the thesis, used a quote, and explained the results. The only major flaw was citing the authors quote.

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